Otter's Descriptive Writing
As constellations began to light up the coal sky, the ground itself shimmered, as to welcome the stars. Nebulae came and joined the family. While the planet’s moons came about and orbited, it cast an amethyst shadow onto the smooth, sleek sapphire surface, giving a delectable but fierce heather. Majestic, beautiful trees glowed and shone bioluminescent lights.
The landscape was lovely. Sand, grass and flowers covered the trees, so interesting, so enigmatic. Though it was heaven and Earth combined, it was barren but serene in the expanse of the planet. It was a phenomenon if discovered in the vastness of the cosmos. Foliaged lumps in the planet circled it and created a crown. An azure river flowed through like a waistband and reflected light.
The planet would keep you in captivity; a spell that made you wonder and stare in awe. Anyone here did not have to move with trepidation for the planet and its tiny inhabitants would be lenient and let anyone in.
Caleb
Beyond the sparkling galaxy, the air was filled with a dazzling circle of the light. Deep within the crystal cavern, the spark of light filled the expanse with radiance and hues. As the hues combined, it was like a group of marvels foreseeing the bright future. With the angular spiral, the luminescent colours lay in the ebony, dull sky. It was almost enigmatic to believe how amazing they were.
Jamie
High above the molten plains, laid a spectacular planet. Despite the crushing gravity, the shimmering black hole was like a never-ending illusion in a world full of twists and emotions. Moments before the storm erupted, the nebulae were shimmering as bright as a diamond. The planet was a deadly hole that looked so peaceful as if someone could jump in and float in it. After endless circles of darkness, laid a wonderful, calming ocean; with waves and sea lions calmly swaying in the midst of trees dancing in the wind. The first shards of light pierced the black hole. Shhh. Shhh. Shhh. Hearing the silence made it feel extra eerie.
Fikemi
As the strawberry-coloured sun set down, the gold moon rose up. The emerald stars danced across the black sky, shining like a fire. As silent as the night itself, the mint-smelling grass stretched from side-to-side. A sky-blue volcano stood silently next to a sapphire lake. The snowy mountaintops were a shield that protected one side of the planet from the other. In the lavender meadow, you could hear; insects, animals and other creatures walking. A cinnamon smell spread around the planet from a ginger bush with apricots on it. Amethyst clouds slid down the mountains ready to sleep. Deep between the mountains, two rough caves snored, opening their mouths and then closing. Although it was night, the planet was as hot as fire.
Alisa